[LTER-BioProd] Agenda paper: new draft, and request to present

Fri Jul 12 00:51:27 PDT 2019

Dear Mary and all,

I enjoyed reading thought the draft and added my comments (on top of the
Laura's and Michel's). I have some thoughts for figures (especially for
fig. 2) but have no concrete idea yet. I am happy to work on any further
revisions for figures and texts.

With best,

Akira

2019年7月11日(木) 7:12 Laura Dee <ledee at umn.edu>:

> Dear all,
> I like Laura W's suggested revision to the Figure, and one thing to add -
> maybe a distinction between what we are proposing versus what is in IPBES
> is that there is no arrow from EF back to BD in IPBES and "nature and
> people" versus the full set of feedbacks, in what we propose? Attaching an
> idea for a modification to Laura's figure to show what I mean, in case it's
> not clear
>
> Best,
> other Laura
>
>
> On Wed, Jul 10, 2019 at 9:21 AM Laura Williams <will3972 at umn.edu> wrote:
>
>> Hi Mary and all,
>>
>> Thanks! I also enjoyed reading this, and I agree with others' comments.
>> I've added a handful of thoughts in the attached word document (including
>> some thoughts on figures).
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Laura
>>
>> On Tue, Jul 9, 2019 at 10:12 AM Laura D. <laura.ellen.dee at gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Mary and all,
>>> This paper is exciting, and I really enjoyed reading it! I'm attaching
>>> my line comments (also with some suggested references as requested) in the
>>> pdf on top of Michel's comments. I am also attaching my higher-level
>>> comments in this word document. For the venue of the paper, what about
>>> Nature Sustainability as a Perspective? My sense is that it might hit the
>>> audience we want more than Current Opinions.
>>>
>>> I agree that we need more concrete examples in the text. Along those
>>> lines, I'm also attaching a paper in press led by Hui Xiao in which we
>>> develop a modeling framework to quantify the value of information about
>>> feedbacks from ecosystem function-biodiversity-and services for managing
>>> ecosystems for multiple conservation objectives (BD and ES). The intro of
>>> the paper and the case study application provide some potentially useful
>>> examples of such feedbacks (and the extent to which they have been
>>> considered in management) that could be helpful for us to cite and flesh
>>> out more examples in our paper. Hui's paper should be out soon.
>>>
>>> Happy to follow up on any of this and help with more specific revisions
>>> to the extent it's helpful.
>>>
>>> Best,
>>> Laura
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On Thu, Jul 4, 2019 at 1:19 PM Jane Cowles <jcowles at umn.edu> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Mary et al.,
>>>>
>>>> This paper looks great. It frames the problem well and in a way that
>>>> doesn’t seem to put down past work but still points out the need for growth
>>>> in these directions. There is nothing major in the attached doc, but some
>>>> smaller ideas that may be worth considering!
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for all the work you’ve put into this. It is a well written and
>>>> very useful paper! Let me know how I can help going forward!
>>>>
>>>> Jane
>>>>
>>>> On Thu, Jul 4, 2019 at 4:53 PM Yann Hautier <yannhautier at gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hi Mary,
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Looking great. I do not have big/conceptual issues. My feeling is that
>>>>> some of the text before the outline of the 7 scientific challenges could be
>>>>> shortened without losing the main message. In other words, we could keep
>>>>> the introduction shorter and more straight to the point and present the
>>>>> challenges earlier. I have a few additional comments attached.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Best,
>>>>>
>>>>> Yann
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> *From:* Bioprod <bioprod-bounces at lists.lternet.edu> *On Behalf Of *Mary
>>>>> O'Connor
>>>>> *Sent:* vrijdag 28 juni 2019 16:01
>>>>> *To:* bioprod at lternet.edu
>>>>> *Subject:* [LTER-BioProd] Agenda paper: new draft, and request to
>>>>> present
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Hello everyone!
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> I hope you are well, and off to a great summer. I’m checking with an
>>>>> update of (hopefully) progress on the Agenda paper (attached). This
>>>>> progress is motivated by me giving a talk at a Biodiversity/Climate Change
>>>>> meeting in Switzerland this coming Thursday. Some of us will be there
>>>>> (Michel, Forest, Jane, Andy H…) and the Agenda paper leaders felt this
>>>>> would be a good time to present this to that audience. Many of the
>>>>> attendees will include people actively involved in the recent IPBES
>>>>> reports.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> So, two action items for you:
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> 1. OPTIONAL: FOR THE TALK NEXT THURSDAY JULY 4: If you have time and
>>>>> would like to comment on this before I present the highlights next
>>>>> Thursday, please do! I apologize for the short notice on this, and I also
>>>>> apologize for sending it on a Friday. If you have any major reservations
>>>>> with me presenting any part of this, let me know. I would like to
>>>>> acknowledge everyone in this group as a co-author on this part of my talk,
>>>>> and if you would prefer that I not do that (or not include your name at
>>>>> this stage) let me know. *Ideally, before Tuesday July 2nd*. *If I
>>>>> don’t hear from you I’ll assume it’s ok to present this with you included
>>>>> as a contributor.*
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> 2. FOR THE MANUSCRIPT: Please read and comment on this version of the
>>>>> manuscript. I’d like to know how close this could be to submittable. I
>>>>> expect another round to the group for ‘final’ feedback after this round,
>>>>> but let me know if I’m off base. I’ve attached a PDF here so you can:
>>>>>
>>>>> - read and provide general comments on big/conceptual issues at this
>>>>> stage.
>>>>>
>>>>> - If you would like to work on text or figures, I would welcome the
>>>>> help and please let me know, I will send a word doc and we can discuss.
>>>>>
>>>>> - please help me with references and examples! You all know some part
>>>>> of the literature better than I do! Highlighted refs are ones that I don’t
>>>>> have but were suggested, so please fill those in too.
>>>>>
>>>>> - I still (as always) need major help with figures so if you are
>>>>> inspired, please help here!
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> *Deadline for comments on this draft: July 12th*. This is very
>>>>> negotiable. After that I will revise and send back out, at that would be a
>>>>> time for finessing wording, etc (we don’t all have to do this, but a few
>>>>> helpers here would be great).
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Still need to make a final call on where to submit. We’re just over
>>>>> 3000 words now and this seems like a good length to me, but I welcome in
>>>>> put on that too.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Best wishes,
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Mary
>>>>>
>>>>>
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>>>> University of Minnesota
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> Biology
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