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<div class="">My flights have been cancelled, so I have some spared time in airports today to read your manuscript. Please find attached some comments
<span class="x_Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"></span>and reference suggestions.</div>
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<div class="">Looking forward to seeing you (rather briefly) in Monte Verità,</div>
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<div class="">Le 28 juin 2019 à 16:08, Mary O'Connor <<a href="mailto:oconnor@zoology.ubc.ca" class="">oconnor@zoology.ubc.ca</a>> a écrit :</div>
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<div class="">Sorry for the second email: Here is the file with a revised author list, and to let you know that I also put the PDF in our google drive.</div>
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<div class="">On Jun 28, 2019, at 4:01 PM, Mary O'Connor <<a href="mailto:oconnor@zoology.ubc.ca" class="">oconnor@zoology.ubc.ca</a>> wrote:</div>
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<div class="">I hope you are well, and off to a great summer. I’m checking with an update of (hopefully) progress on the Agenda paper (attached). This progress is motivated by me giving a talk at a Biodiversity/Climate Change meeting in Switzerland this coming
Thursday. Some of us will be there (Michel, Forest, Jane, Andy H…) and the Agenda paper leaders felt this would be a good time to present this to that audience. Many of the attendees will include people actively involved in the recent IPBES reports. </div>
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<div class="">So, two action items for you:</div>
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<div class="">1. OPTIONAL: FOR THE TALK NEXT THURSDAY JULY 4: If you have time and would like to comment on this before I present the highlights next Thursday, please do! I apologize for the short notice on this, and I also apologize for sending it on a Friday.
If you have any major reservations with me presenting any part of this, let me know. I would like to acknowledge everyone in this group as a co-author on this part of my talk, and if you would prefer that I not do that (or not include your name at this stage)
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<div class="">2. FOR THE MANUSCRIPT: Please read and comment on this version of the manuscript. I’d like to know how close this could be to submittable. I expect another round to the group for ‘final’ feedback after this round, but let me know if I’m off base.
I’ve attached a PDF here so you can:</div>
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<div class="">- If you would like to work on text or figures, I would welcome the help and please let me know, I will send a word doc and we can discuss. </div>
<div class="">- please help me with references and examples! You all know some part of the literature better than I do! Highlighted refs are ones that I don’t have but were suggested, so please fill those in too.</div>
<div class="">- I still (as always) need major help with figures so if you are inspired, please help here!</div>
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<div class=""><b class="">Deadline for comments on this draft: July 12th</b>. This is very negotiable. After that I will revise and send back out, at that would be a time for finessing wording, etc (we don’t all have to do this, but a few helpers here would
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<div class="">Still need to make a final call on where to submit. We’re just over 3000 words now and this seems like a good length to me, but I welcome in put on that too.</div>
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